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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Labyrinth The heat is on, expectations on the rise as that white fluff is on its way to cleanse the earth and refresh my mind with promises, if only to be kept. I value that which I no longer have my password too secretive its wall too high, its wait too wide and then there is you whose nevermindattitude cools the warmth in my heart. I am not that mysterious although I must admit I keep that labyrinth snarled until that speaktruth rests upon these ears and your autograph is scrawled upon this body pressuring its feel into realization. I see into the almost wishing for the surety being in the forever of each moment wanting to not be just a "window watcher" suppressing the expressiveness, untangling the dreams that guide me into understanding that which rests with me... uncomfortably. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"I see into the almost" ... now make it reality...   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it's like someone once said to me... We'll see? God your writing cuts to the chase...heart and mind...incredible...and I loved it. Can't talk enough about PIP to some old friends, poets...hope they stop by and take a looksee at the talent within these pages. Hugs to you and yours my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Agree with sunshine in this, good write. |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Untangling the dreams! Now don't we all do that, or at least try to. Nice write M, very nice. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I am not that mysterious although I must admit I keep that labyrinth snarled until that speaktruth rests upon these ears and your autograph is scrawled upon this body pressuring its feel into realization. Yep, i understand this too..... scrawl, ink, paint something on the body make it real it's time   |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent....overall...form and content In particular...here in these phrases "I see into the almost " "being in the forever of each moment" Which make the poem outstanding.... enjoyed ___________ice/ford ><> |
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