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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-18-2005 09:13 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Are
our avenues
so well lit

Is all respect
for stern Rome lost

that from the catacombs
Christians come

to spread
their gentle creed
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-18-2005 10:05 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You continue to give your gentle poems
female names...
which finds no fault, indeed...
but you have me wondering

why?
Huan Yi
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2 posted 01-19-2005 12:12 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi

Sunshine,

I am not creative.  It is more accurate to say
that I am reflective.  This particular writing
was a response to a woman who, though having
no business purpose, used to come up from her
below street level office in the building where
we both worked to visit and talk with me.
I seem to be influenced by the Eternal Feminine
when and as I have the chance to experience her.
Iím really not interested in my self.

Thanks for reading.

John

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3 posted 01-19-2005 03:24 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Always so interesting to see what you write...
and then, after pondering over it,
to see exactly what it is about.

You write softly,
and it echoes well on these pages,
I believe.


Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Drauntz
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4 posted 04-28-2007 02:28 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

"Iím really not interested in my self."????

not only your poem but yourself is a puzzle as well. why? and it is not true anyway...because you fought with me which proved that you were very well self protet and self-respect and have  a big ego... huge ego is what i want to say.

still a great man though.
 
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