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Whisper - Triolet
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Whisper - Triolet |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Whisper - Triolet It is this, a whisper’s promise That binds the ties with silken cord That lends to thought just one love’s kiss It is this, a whisper’s promise That rounds in rings, and gives all this; Nor that fortunes could e’er afford It is this, a whisper’s promise That binds the ties with silken cord [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-19-2005 05:55 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful, lady, just beautiful!  .......jo |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Just a whisper in the night A knee in the back Snoring to diminish to Just a whisper in the morning On another plain Words to excite to Just a whisper At lunch Advice treasured To mumblings of Just whisper in the night Loved the words Sunshine Dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Interesting, this triolet...should the virgin hands of the elderly try something such as this? Perhaps, but would he be able to even hold a small candle to her offerings? I think not. |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This was beautiful, Sunshine!  Enjoyed reading your thoughts today! ...Becka |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely lovely! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent, bravo! Great write Sunshine JL |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh well done! I love triolets and rondelets, and this is lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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