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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-01-18 06:25 PM



Like placid freezing rain
Your cold words left me still,
As you are nonchalant.

Wonder how you do it.
Every day you raze
dreams you dissenagrate

Swallow your stupid pride

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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Gaia
1 posted 2005-01-18 09:27 PM


Interesting message. Guess you aren't swallowing someone's negative attitude or behavior.

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-01-18 11:01 PM


Sometimes you wish they could only see -

freezing rain - yeah, that's what we've got here right now - pleck!

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2005-01-19 11:36 AM


Thank you for your replies.
The origanal poem had it where it was mirred, but I changed it, because of the complexity

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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