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0 posted 2005-01-18 05:29 PM


Dreaming of you a passion.


I’d settle for just a single…

breath held whilst I gauge your

beauty is in the eye

as I gaze deeper still

falling slowly, gently to

sleep and dreams, beautiful

white roses climb across

hands held in the summer sun

warming thoughts on the journey

towards being much closer to a

…kiss



© Copyright 2005 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-18 05:41 PM


Nice romantic writing...James
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2 posted 2005-01-18 05:49 PM


yes nice and romantic


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3 posted 2005-01-18 10:45 PM




~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Susan
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4 posted 2005-01-18 10:47 PM


lovely -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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Oh, Bravo!  
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6 posted 2005-01-18 11:06 PM


Your poem was full of passion,
what a romantic kiss, I closed my eyes and I could feel it!

~Love and Hugs
ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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