navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » Night Shirt
Open Poetry #34
Post A Reply Post New Topic Night Shirt Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2005-01-18 01:03 PM



Aimless wonder be rhythm

Mix of music, winter magic
Stirs your mind…every tune
Working full count to remember
Place to place
From January to December

Balloons
White lace laughter
Cottage with windows

Listening to your sea

Your mass Disneyland insight
Sparks send light

Warming life again
Time again
Tender again
Life’s days are extraordinary

You
Touch eyes with mountains
The Four seasons….

Ominous wonder
Soaring high
Touching me
Touching you
Touching us

Mankind’s time writing language
On woodwind & strings

Bursting color, what is wild and mysterious?
Caliber groups glittering dragonflies

Leaping upward like translucent jewels
Your words grow wings
This world being a better place for it

For the manly way of you
Muse isolation, suffering, love, triumphs

Amber quiet seeps within authentication
Seraphim classics & image faced forests

Are you the mocking bird of
What would not listen?
Whoosh, a gust of wind filling sails?

Unknown whispers nibble my ear
With interest and recognition…..

You’re an out of body experience
Prediction spinning on air…nirvana

Tranquility on ice
Painting green roll backs of time


Summer’s care, remembering
Naming us….moist couplets pretty high

Tell me again…how you love me
Refusing to live with regrets
Incantations of a moment
Quivering of scent….

I'll never
never end
this poem...

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-18-2005 02:49 PM).]

© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-01-18 02:48 PM



Oh good grief girl...
I hope you never end this poem either...

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-01-18 03:05 PM


Oh my - and it shouldn't end - I found myself smiling and feeling all fuzzy inside at the beauty it stirred in my heart - you pen some of the most incredible stuff -
but this . . .

You’re an out of body experience
Prediction spinning on air…nirvana

I absolutely love -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2005-01-18 03:07 PM


Such peaceful feelings you convery, LeeJ~
Much enjoyed the view and sweeping beauty~


MGROVES
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
4 posted 2005-01-18 03:09 PM


oh please dont end it, leaves you hungry for more.  very nice lee


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-01-18 03:09 PM


Are you the mocking bird of
What would not listen?
Whoosh, a gust of wind filling sails?


please do as you say...
never ever end it!  Fantastic Lee!

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2005-01-19 03:53 PM


"I'll never
never end
this poem..."
Good for you!
Great one Lee J.

JL



*Alli4000*
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
7 posted 2005-01-19 07:03 PM


Wonderful!!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

8 posted 2005-01-19 07:27 PM


In your nightshirt are many passions and they seem to become better with every moment.

Take care Lee

Dave

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » Night Shirt

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary