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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-01-18 12:41 PM



The Pleasure And Passion

Its the feelings in my heart
Just to know you're around
Your tender words of love
Have the sweetest sound

Its  the feelings of intimacy
That togetherness inspires
Cosy hugs and soft kisses
To those deepest desires

Its the feelings I embraced
Hands caressing blissfully
Savouring sweet pleasure
As your lips slide over me

Its the feelings love ignited
The burning passion of we
Love glistening on the skin
Wears the glow of ecstasy

HopeĀ©2005

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-01-18 01:17 PM


As your lips slide over me


that was my favorite line....yummy, now you've done it...I'm thinkin about Kevin Costner again...????  Oh well, sa la vi???

Good one

MGROVES
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2 posted 2005-01-18 04:24 PM


very nice


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-01-18 05:44 PM


Yep...yummy...James
DavePage
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4 posted 2005-01-18 06:42 PM


Hope

It sounds delicious.

Dave

iliana
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5 posted 2005-01-18 07:23 PM


Hope, the title describes this perfectly.  Enjoyed.   ....jo
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6 posted 2005-01-18 10:38 PM


Great write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-01-19 05:32 AM


very!
Daniel J D
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8 posted 2005-01-19 05:42 PM


Words words and words, well put together.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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9 posted 2005-01-19 05:51 PM


Mmmmmmm, delicious..
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