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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2005-01-18 12:12 PM


Another time/another Chance

Let me surrender myself to you
For your love warms this cold heart
That once was ever true
Past pains have made you smart

You will never again be the fool
I will never forget what I did to you
It always seemed pain was my tool
Yet deep down you knew

I have faced myself and seen the ugly truth
You have moved on and I hope the best
Never again can I return to my innocence and youth
I just hope and prey I can lay my sins to rest

I hope to replace the sorrow
Let it be washed away by the rain
Today, tomorrow
Time will test again

© Copyright 2005 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
MGROVES
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1 posted 2005-01-18 02:29 AM


wow, nice to hear this, something one wishes for and never recieves from pain given by another even when ones heart forgives for that pain created by one without sorrow for giving it, it still lives deep inside for tonight i will think of it as if to me and i will give to forgiveness to you and may you too give yourself forgiveness as the hardest person to forgive is one's self   thankyou so much for these words tonight  they was needed  even if not intended for one   bless you   


Thomas119gold
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2 posted 2005-01-18 04:58 PM


I appreciate that


froggy
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3 posted 2005-01-19 12:16 PM


They say Sorry is the hardest word to say
and yet through your words it was seen.
I hope whoever this was written for can find
within themselves to forgive.

:-)

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2005-01-19 01:17 PM


Very good and, I felt, from the heart poetry here. Seems that we have gone down a simmilar path and I've learned that even after the forgivness, and her being there with you is certainly a very good sign of that in my book, what truly takes time and practice to rebuild is the trust and I do hope the very very best for you both. -Bob
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5 posted 2005-01-19 08:05 PM


This was beautifully, heart wrenching, Thomas!   If I ever received these words from the guys that have hurt me...I would certainly forgive them.  But MGROVES is right...the forgiveness needs to come from within.  I pray that you will have the strength to forgive yourself...and that you let God take care of the rest.  He always knows what He is doing.

Prayers and hugs for you m'friend!

...Becka

Thomas119gold
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6 posted 2005-01-20 05:15 PM


You all have given me food for thought on the matter. Words of wisdom and I appreciate them.
Thomas

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