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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2005-01-17 05:43 PM



Aiedo,

Love upon Loves.
Your heart. Your Love.
What you call "Love"
is so much more.

Worlds upon worlds.
We tape over the last one.
Our universe, a tape cassette.

Aiedo,

From person to person.
From age to age.
From face to face,
Dill, nutmeg and sage.

From all that was done,
and all that was said.
Is there anything left to be done?

Aiedo,

Look in the mirror.
Who is that person?
Look in the mirror.
Who are you?

Take a deep breath.
The world is yours.
Take a step back.
A whole life ahead.

Aiedo,

You must learn to love
the stranger you are
in this strangest of worlds
among strangers.

The nameless streets.
These boundless skies.
..so cold and distant..
Your feelings,
stay unknown to you.

Aiedo,

Angel of angels.

Possibilities.
Snenarios.
Paralell realities.
Afterlives.
Feelings.
Incarnations.

Rain.

"Nay,

I am but a man,"

said He.


© Copyright 2005 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-01-17 08:23 PM


Not sure I understand this one. Is Aiedo a game?
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2005-01-18 12:29 PM


This one is a song.  At first I didn't get it, and then it started singing itself, and it's beautiful.  


Nan (Pilgrim variety)

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-01-18 01:24 PM


not only a song, but absolute and beautifully written and felt...well done!
MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-01-18 04:57 PM


yes it is beautiful and and understood


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5 posted 2005-01-18 09:13 PM


interesting write eagle
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6 posted 2005-01-18 10:48 PM


Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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