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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-01-17 02:33 PM



what day passed
I have not prayed
for you?
hoped you dared not
forget how your mind
wrote indelible stories
over willing papyrus soul?

am I not enlivened with
every utterance of eloquence?

Yes...

supple, pliable softness
becoming
volcanic ripples of smoldering
heat named
is there sun or moon?
how can I know, when blind I've
become to all but you?

If wishes be granted
I would love you eternally
If dreams truly came true
would these words cry into
the emptiness of avoid?

I found you and
discovered keys to
unlocking me
an infinity of doors
imprisoned behind for
none moved me like you

oh, how you held me

for one fleeting moment
in time's secretive journey,
you loved me

so I prayed for you,
with beseeching, hoped
what you truly desire
lies nestled sweetly
in the palms of your
strong, manly hands

true happiness

for you,
the one you love,

and me...


~tier
9/99

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-17 04:34 PM


none moved me like you

oh, how you held me

for one fleeting moment


Sigh...

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2 posted 2005-01-17 07:20 PM


Great write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

MGROVES
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3 posted 2005-01-17 07:37 PM


oh yes ~sigh~  very nice


Magnus
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4 posted 2005-01-17 07:41 PM


Tier,  this one brings to lips a
definite "SIGH"...  Without question.  May
this be as you wish.

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Gaia
5 posted 2005-01-17 08:54 PM


such a smooth, intimate feel to this
thank you, for sharing  

Susan
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6 posted 2005-01-17 08:58 PM


Oh, this is incredible - your words melt me -
well done

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-01-17 10:15 PM


dang! this is great!
saved_by_grace
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8 posted 2005-01-17 10:57 PM


Amazing write, Tiersdin!!  Going to the library with this one...   Thanks for sharing.

Take care,

Becka

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