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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-01-17 11:12 AM




Memories recalled  
arise gently from
places of hearts hold

and I know

that the missing
won't hold me
in sorrows bind,

but rather
      a smile
will linger;
for you see,
the gift given
will carry me
through the passages
     of time.

When my journey
would take me
through darkened skies
I won't allow the night
to frighten me,

I shall remember the lessons
that you have taught,
and in return
      I have learned
that only I
can keep from shining
the light within me.

Through my days
of dark,       or light
you will always be
by my side,

As life happens;
        seasons shall bring us
back around
     holding us in
                  what time   allows.

{dedicated to Greeneyes, and thank you Lauren, for the beauty of this inspire}


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-01-17 11:41 AM



It's good to see
that your inspiration
has come home!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-17 11:43 AM


When my journey
would take me
through darkened skies
I won't allow the night
to frighten me,


Your new picture is as beautiful as your poems...

This was beatufiully done...

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2005-01-17 12:08 PM


you have left me with no words but to say Thank you & love you Donna....for this and the friendship we have! heart hugs

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-01-17 09:52 PM


Donna, this is a beautiful and wonderful gift for Lauren
passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-01-17 09:55 PM


smiling at you
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-01-18 09:34 AM


I want to thank you each for your replies and kindness.  She left me in thought the other day on how  there is never enough time
and we can't always be everywhere at once so we have to make the most of each minute, especially when those moments are shared with people we care for and cherish.  

Lauren, you are pretty darn good at inspiring,
and pretty darn good at being a cherished friend
No matter the time intervals or distance.
You are as I say "a keeper"
and you know me...I don't keep very many!!
Only when God sends angels......

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-01-18 10:13 AM


mmmm yes donna and lauren..can see the bond of your gentle ways here

kewl stuff ladies

slow love to both of you

Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
8 posted 2005-01-19 02:05 AM


Words of wisdom.
"When my journey
would take me
through darkened skies
I won't allow the night
to frighten me,"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Thomas119gold
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9 posted 2005-01-21 09:40 AM


I shall remember the lessons
that you have taught,
and in return
      I have learned
that only I
can keep from shining
the light within me.

Words of wisdom I hope to hold true

Tom

Robert Frazier
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10 posted 2005-01-21 09:43 AM



"As life happens;
     seasons shall bring us
     back around"

this is so good!  there's so much hope in that thought . . . and so much truth.  thanks for reminding me!

Rf

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2005-01-27 12:02 PM


Dark, Daniel, Thomas and Robert, my thanks to each of you for leaving your thoughts and I am so pleased that you enjoyed.
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