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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2005-01-16 08:53 PM





I haven’t seen no humans
For ten days, maybe more
And prob’ly wouldn’t ever
If not for going to the store
When about out of groceries
And things that I like most
I take heels of the loaf
And turn them into toast
I scrape edges of the tub
Of the Shedds margarine
I spread it far as I can
And it ends up pretty thin
The sweet jams and jellies
Cover the bottoms of the glass
That I will clean up now
Right down to the very last
And the liquor stock of mine
On top of the old fridge
Might see me from this valley
To the top of the next ridge
I got some one-ninety grain
With licorice sticks to soak
Making my own special stock
To make my taste buds smoke
I’ll sip it down until it’s dry
As those dead soldiers grow
Lick my lips, thirst unquenched
As I line them up in a row
I got me some herb smoke
That I bought out online
It ain’t like that cannabis
But it will do, just fine
Though I quit two years ago
Of that bad tobacco smoke
Sometimes it’s nice, just to have
Some kind of a fake toke.

Winter is the season now
With it’s chilling to the bone
As I learn a little bit more
Well! That’s more than I’ve known!

The snowflakes are falling
Look like they may stick
There’s seven deer eating grass
Winter coats, grown thick
They seem in a hurry
Ooops! They just up and ran
Maybe they know something
Much more than I can
Put an old pork chop out
For a Freckles Cat feast
Saw a squirrel running with it
Must be a hungry little beast
Ain’t seen turkeys in awhile
Maybe someone killed them all
Lured them in, within range
With some made up call
The trees are most all bare
With green left on just a few
And some are acting different
Than what they usually do
I killed wasps or hornets
Or whatever the hell they are
In this middle of winter
When they should be off afar
Strange things are happening
Or is it just this time I see
All that happened once before
Right there, in front of me.

Del "Abe" Jones

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1 posted 2005-01-16 10:39 PM


I really enjoyed this story poem of yours.  Strange how winder sharpens the senses, and all of sudden things that seemed invisible now are front and center.  Very enjoyable read.

Carpe' Diem

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2 posted 2005-01-17 10:38 PM


WOW! so much going on in here, a feast for hungry eyes
ice
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3 posted 2005-01-18 05:20 AM


Abe
Somewhat like a talking blues song...
Love the ending..
__________ice/ford
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