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Winter's Wedding Topping
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Winter's Wedding Topping |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Winter’s Wedding Topping as a wedding cake my neighbor’s house stands beneath smooth, white frosting giving a sense of sweetness within a luscious array of thoughts, flavors reach into my memories tantalizing me, luring me come, imbibe a joy of camaraderie will fill you, lift your spirits a slice of effervescence one “forkful” at a time ©January 16, 2005 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Yummy!!! I enjoyed the thoughts of camaraderie that you expressed here and the flavor of your poem was soooo rich that I could almost taste it. -Bob |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, muchly! I have to tell you that today's snow looked more like frosting than I've ever seen it. Glad you enjoyed. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Pretty picture, thank you, marty |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a joy of camaraderie will fill you, lift your spirits a slice of effervescence one “forkful” at a time and so have you Big smiles |
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