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time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2005-01-16 03:41 PM




The locked door, no longer locked
as he finally ventures forth.
Standing on a beach of black sand
watching Gannets whirl in dance,
blue skies and white birds
with turquoise ringed eyes
conjuring the vision of love.
Their bond eternal, is such,
that only death can part.
Perhaps from these he learns
that you are never too old,
to start listening to your heart.
If not today, then sometime soon.

© Copyright 2005 Frank Bennett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-16 04:28 PM


The heart speaks loudly when love, even
eternal love is broached.  Well said,
thank you.

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2005-01-16 05:40 PM


How very lovely!
And I enjoyed the picture too.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2005-01-16 06:24 PM


Wonderful write...i love the picture!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
4 posted 2005-01-16 07:15 PM


I loved this...eternal love is an amazing thing...I think it's some thing that we won't know the full strength of until we pass from this world to the next.  This was beautiful, time prophet!

...Becka

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5 posted 2005-01-16 07:25 PM


lovely picture...lovely words

~smiling~ at your good weather

M

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