Final of Nothing (part of lightly)

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-01-15 05:52 PM

Nothing

Understanding outcasts your mind
Of
Sound
Colour
Words
Misunderstandings

Soul gathered pain
Tempting tempestuous skies for understanding
Echoing thoughts that in your eyes of nothing
Desiring nothing
You give all to nothing

Cupping your thoughts to your words
But understanding nothing
You said "I desire nothing, I have nothing, I understand nothing and all I have to give you is what I feel, nothing"

In a world
As heavy rain spins heroes to the courage
Dancing on tin roofs of heated emotion
Eyes sparkling strength impotence dreams
You ignored

As ice crimson blue fire
Lances a boil
Of your futility
And your desire for nothing

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

1 posted 2005-01-16 10:48 PM

far from "nothingness" is this thought provoking piece!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-01-16 10:49 PM

wow

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-01-17 07:46 AM

You said "I desire nothing, I have nothing, I understand nothing and all I have to give you is what I feel, nothing"

heard and felt that before~~~

M

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2005-01-17 09:13 AM

Reminds me of those blank icy stares !!

Hope

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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5 posted 2005-01-17 02:08 PM

marcel

Thanks.    It is meant to be real and you sometimes wonder why men and women go at each other like out of a rat trap thinking "making love" is "love" whilst both wanted the first and not the second.

passing shadows

Thanks passing.

I suppose it comes under the heading "what price honesty" but everyone in fear of losing something they never had is a politician.

nakdthoughts

You said "I desire nothing, I have nothing, I understand nothing and all I have to give you is what I feel, nothing"

heard and felt that before~~~

M

Unfortunately still true as we dont break a mould (spelling is correct for what I meant).

HopeS

Reminds me of those blank icy stares !!

Hope

Why I wonder Hope do you make me want to crack jokes.

1.  And then he realised, he was in love.
2.  The ice melted and he wondered what that was on the floor in front of his trousers (referring to water)
3.  I just I could have some veg with this meal.

I am taken the fun Hope because I would be surprised that someone would have those blank stares unless it was in surprise.

I wasn't going to write the evangelical sight of the woman but I will do.

Thanks all.

Your comments are always welcome.

regards

Dave

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