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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-01-15 03:13 PM


Brilliantly, silently, the star of your birth rose
into the skies of night, waiting to caress the
dawn of my essence, an essence born of fruits
that have softly fallen to earth.

And from the fruits a succulence is given
freely, that I might linger in the taste of that
which you have left.

And, when the winds come upon the plain
of my life, I shall lie beneath as your shimmering
arms touch my soul, leaving a last lingering
breath upon my lips.  For I am...and shall
ever remain...yours.

© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2005-01-15 03:52 PM


Barry

Your words took my breath away and were simply outstanding.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Susan
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2 posted 2005-01-15 04:39 PM


Barry - you hush me with your words - stunning -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-01-15 04:39 PM


Barry,
That and a box of candy will do it evey time. Enjoyed

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with you
4 posted 2005-01-15 04:49 PM


only if the box of candy is turtles
this is beautiful

saved_by_grace
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5 posted 2005-01-15 06:16 PM


Beautiful...   I am glad I stopped by...

Becka

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2005-01-15 07:23 PM


Another vivid and beautiful write.
TD

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7 posted 2005-01-15 11:54 PM


Fantastic write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

iliana
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8 posted 2005-01-16 12:44 PM


Passionfruit.....yes....yummy poem!   .....jo
Martie
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9 posted 2005-01-16 01:13 AM


Barry my very....so passionate and deeply felt!  
MGROVES
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10 posted 2005-01-16 02:30 AM




   it's nice to know that their are still men out there with such a beautiful romantic loving heart   someday my prince will come and i too shall hear words of love to me like yours to a really lucky person    thanks for showing there are some men left with hearts of gold  


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11 posted 2005-01-16 06:45 AM


whew
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12 posted 2005-01-16 01:52 PM


Heavenly...

thank you for sharing such beauty.

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2005-01-16 02:46 PM


Magnus~

'For I am...and shall
ever remain...yours.'


Oh my friend ... how intimately these words know me~

Thank you ... I'd like very much to share this with one that I love~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
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14 posted 2005-01-17 10:11 PM


Savoring this.

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15 posted 2005-01-19 11:21 PM


I hope this is seen by the one it was written of....it'll squeeze every tear out of her heart....

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JamesMichael
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16 posted 2005-01-19 11:34 PM


Enjoyed...James
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17 posted 2005-01-24 01:24 PM


And, when the winds come upon the plain
of my life, I shall lie beneath as your shimmering
arms touch my soul, leaving a last lingering
breath upon my lips.  For I am...and shall
ever remain...yours.

So very beautiful... I hope she hears this heartspeak. *S*

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