navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » wake to heaven
Open Poetry #34
Post A Reply Post New Topic wake to heaven Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-15 07:40 AM



how far away is heaven
you ask
looking at you
looking back in my eyes

just a thought away
I answer
looking at me
looking back in your eyes

I think that thought often
you say
looking at me
wanting to be there now

I do too always
I reply
looking at you
taking me there with you
_____________

Dark

© Copyright 2005 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
MGROVES
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
1 posted 2005-01-15 07:45 AM


love it


nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-01-15 07:50 AM


nice~~

M

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-01-15 08:12 AM



Those eye images
in colored pools...

beautiful!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2005-01-15 08:44 AM


you sould me
i'll go

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-01-15 09:29 AM


Heaven is only a glance away is it not?


Enjoyed this one D but how on earth did you
know that's one of my favorite songs. lol
Good morning Dark.

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-01-15 11:30 AM


"Yes, I can see the reflection of heaven in this - beautiful D-" she replies with a far away look in her eyes -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

saved_by_grace
Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332
In the arms of God...
7 posted 2005-01-15 12:48 PM


This was beautiful!  Would be nice to just wake to Heaven, wouldn't it?   The day is coming...***big grins***

Becka

*Alli4000*
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
8 posted 2005-01-15 03:13 PM




~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » wake to heaven

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary