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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-14 01:25 PM

our love
moves the moon
to envy

to croon love tunes
to the stars
in the hopes of their adoration

for the light
in our eyes
shames his glow
and the heavens
seem to revolve around us

s.a.t.

for my muse -

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-14 01:26 PM

I guess thats why it is the kind of love God meant for man to know, only through choice

Exceptional writing hun...enjoyed

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-01-14 01:32 PM

Thanks LeeJ - I think you are right - yes - we were meant to know such love -

appreciate your warm reply - hugs -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2005-01-14 01:33 PM

Beautiful poetry.

Enjoyed!

JL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-01-14 01:40 PM

ah...just beautiful

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-01-14 01:45 PM

Lovely this...
Lovely you...
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-01-14 02:36 PM

Pure romance.

If I may insert a little piece of humour.

Partner to Partner "you howled"

Partner to Partner "I bought you toe nail clippers for Christmas".

Dave

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

7 posted 2005-01-14 03:00 PM

I believe you made your Muse very happy with such fine expression

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-01-14 03:04 PM

thank you friends - it is so nice to see your names and feel the touch of your words-

Ah, Dave - howling at the moon -

Hugs all - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2005-01-14 03:06 PM

"moves the room to envy" . . . if walls could only talk! Beautiful, Susan!

Rf

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2005-01-14 04:30 PM

so where does one sign up for muse duty?
mmmmm lovely love susan..btw..does muse duty have full run of the house? (hehe)

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2005-01-14 06:12 PM

thank you Robert - love your reply

D- paper work is in the mail

Can you cook? hehe -

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

12 posted 2005-01-14 07:34 PM

Love this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2005-01-14 08:53 PM

thanks Alli - hugs -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2005-01-14 09:11 PM

Such fun, isn't it..writing romance beneath
stars...even if it were in the backseat of
a convertible...hmmmmm, memories.

Thanx Susan, excellent thoughts!!!

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

15 posted 2005-01-14 11:24 PM

Abso(freakin)lutely love this! Bravo Susan. I applaud your wonderful verse and bump it back to the top where it belongs!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

16 posted 2005-01-15 12:31 PM

Mmmmm - Barry - glad I could spur some memories - they sound delightful - thanks dear Sir -

EV2 - you are too kind sir - thank you most graciously -

Hugs to you both -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

17 posted 2005-01-15 07:31 AM

can I cook? yes,,,but,,
well uh,,,wouldn't that hurt?

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2005-01-15 10:01 AM

beautiful Susan.....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

19 posted 2005-01-15 11:33 AM

Thanks you green eyes - most kindly

D- only if you were to over do it

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

20 posted 2005-01-15 05:48 PM

Very Beautiful

:-)

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

21 posted 2005-01-16 01:17 AM

Sure sounds like it! Much enjoyed, Susan!

.....jo

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

22 posted 2005-01-16 11:57 AM

Froggy - thank you for your very

Jo - hugs lovely lady -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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