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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Feelings related of angels and forgotten paths staining cheeks with darkness and dust away, outside of myself searching for the roads to lead to rivers edge- -- the cold waters that reveal everything— Tonight the amber in sleep will bare my soul – a quiet that smoothes dark mirrors between layers burning words in air Somehow I misunderstood each part of water hoping for a moment to hear the tapping of fingers in fields of light Some night I will write again of wildflowers and Autumn’s chill: ~ "It begins here" from lines of these pages soaked in amber's hue softly echoing the sound of water and open roads ~~*~~ Read between the lines look deep into each word and you will understand the depth of my soul (GE) ~~**~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Some night I will write again of wildflowers and Autumn’s chill: ~ "It begins here" from lines of these pages soaked in amber's hue softly echoing the sound of water and open roads" Lordy gal you have been missed!!!! Welcome back Lauren..please don't frighten me like that and stay away so long again okay? Your beautiful writing has been SO missed. Big welcome home hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice poetry! Enjoyed the read. JL |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Good stuff!! Rf |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feelings related of angels and forgotten paths staining cheeks with darkness and dust away, outside of myself searching for the roads to lead to rivers edge- -- the cold waters that reveal everything ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ yes.... the answers are found by the water....and...in your verse. good to read your lovely words again L-girlie. Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Happy Dance being done....  SHE'S BACK!!! First let me say how much you have been missed girl.... and now to the poem well damn, you already know I don't have the words to express how much this read moved me and as usual I am picking my jaw up off the ground while thanking God that you share your gift and your soul with these pages of blue.... Lordy  you have been so very missed. WELCOME HOME The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome Home... I'll be back...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
"It begins here" from lines of these pages soaked in amber's hue softly echoing the sound of water and open roads boy have I missed reading you...my days complete, with a wonderful weekend smiling Tremendous, and so happy your back, stay for awhile, won't you????? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome piece, as usual |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
*sigh* no one writes like our Lauren. Beautiful and so glad that you are back. Hugs, Chris  You said you'd give me light- But you never told me about the fire Stevie Nicks |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All right... I've read this three times... and all I can say is don't go missing again, y'hear? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome home Lauren. I too find all the answers as well as some questions by the water, or in it. Lovely homecoming piece m'friend, and trust all is well. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I appreciate the warm welcome back.....it's good to be among the blue again .... I have much to catch up on and look forward to doing so... hugsssss to all ~~*~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome back, dear poetess Lauren! Great use of language and imagery! Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely lovely writing, Lauren...as alway is from you. So good to see you!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sigh i know i've said it before, but only because your words leave me lacking for words, or a proper reply... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Welcome back! Wonderful write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Heh green eyes! Nice write! Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Welcome home dear lady, your ever so charming words have been missed. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Somehow I misunderstood each part of water hoping for a moment to hear the tapping of fingers in fields of light" Some words are worth waiting for. Very good to read ya again, Loopy...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Silently nodding and holding you close, as I walk that same road you're on. It is so good to read you again, Lady Lauren~ You've been missed by many~ Hugs, honey~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It IS very good to read you again Lady Lauren, and my you write merlot. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
one line really struck me....but I will keep it to myself! |
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