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Open Poetry #34

spatial anomalies

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2005-01-13 11:16 PM

Another day is through
and I'm still looking at you,
looking at the door,
I opened long ago.
If only you could move
perhaps we'd both
go through it.

What are we
waiting for?
Close the door.

Another day
drains away
whatever joy
had remained.
Fixed, like water
your face transforms
my disappointment
into something darker
something foreign
to progress.

What are we
waiting for?
Break down
the open door.

Another day
begins anew.
Another day
we're hard to prove
a kind lie
is better
than a
cruel truth.

What are we
waiting for?

There is no door.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2005-01-13 11:58 PM

very nice work

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-01-14 12:57 PM

Love the title even more after reading the great poem!

....jo

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2005-01-14 01:00 AM

most often we create our own barriers and then sit on the sidelines brooding about it...keep up the good imagery...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-01-14 03:32 PM

Ooh! Man-man, this one speaks volumes and volumes.

JL

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-01-14 03:39 PM

A pleasure to read you ~K~

M

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-01-14 05:57 PM

Interesting.

Very nice.

Dave

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-14 06:51 PM

I ALWAYS love your poems ~K~!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2005-01-14 09:49 PM

Doorframes and empty space;
left to retrace
these places left paralyzed,
traumatized
by distance.
To follow you
and step through;
edging the forbidden.

Kind reprieve, binding;
holding breath
deep in your chest
too far from parted lips.

Only one answer to this...

just speak clearly
we're nearly there.

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