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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-01-13 10:30 PM



Ones that hang precariously
a corner's web laid seriously
down to famous bowl of curds and whey
eight legged company descends its way

Hunger pangs sees silken thread slacken
little mistresses on toad stool fatten
eight legged arachnids despise milky cream
who knows if they delight in female screams

One that hangs precariously
water spout leaks after constant use
a weenie creature dipped into whey abuse
can satisfy urges to scare tapped refuse

Miss Muffet could turn on water spouts
tuffet spores would doubtlessly sprout
enactment of who scares whom continues
directly from taps or atop cheesy menus.



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-14-2005 12:18 AM).]

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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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1 posted 2005-01-13 11:50 PM


I like this one.

Thank-you for the smile.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-01-14 12:09 PM


adding to library
ecrivan
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my own state
3 posted 2005-01-14 12:20 PM


changed a couple of words though...you can add it now Dixie


iliana
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4 posted 2005-01-14 12:50 PM


This gave me a chuckle!  Is there anything you cannot turn into poetry?!
Sunshine
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5 posted 2005-01-14 10:40 AM



To answer Iliana...NO...



Carry on!

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