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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2005-01-13 07:53 PM

Do you walk alone,
in the winter wood's stark depths
where words do not reach?
Across an expanse of white
... only your footprints remain.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-13 08:21 PM

Choshi, beautiful images...

check your e-mail...

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-01-13 09:32 PM

I like this. Kinda mysterios. Darn I can't spell oh well.

Juju

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-13 09:44 PM

I feel it - the silence of walking into the depths of nature - of the woods - you've captured it so beautifully - leaving only the soft foot prints - nicely done

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2005-01-13 10:12 PM

Do you walk alone,
in the winter wood's stark depths
where words do not reach?
Across an expanse of white
... only your footprints remain.

*******************************************
footprints sink fast
within the insulation
of winter's white,
your snowangel on the
slow path we took,
now distorts, barely
visible this night

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-01-13 10:15 PM

Paul, what a good Waka! Yes, I do, sometimes.

....jo

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-01-13 10:38 PM

Very nice indeed. Enjoyed. Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2005-01-14 12:01 PM

beautifully written choshi

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-01-14 12:02 PM

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2005-01-14 11:51 AM

Very much enjoyed!

INclan

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2005-01-14 08:36 PM

This is beautiful!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2005-01-14 09:11 PM

Choshi, this is a delight.

I love that silence and the footprints are beautiful.

Love, Margherita

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2005-01-14 09:41 PM

Your words paint a picture in my mind.

believe in what your heart feels...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2005-01-20 07:52 PM

nice

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