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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-01-13 03:21 PM

Heavy in the bank that day
Station in full flood
Snow on the roads
Wet above my head

Took my cap off
Always in the way
I thought it was dashing
Those thoughts have run away

Looking like a road
After the grittier has passed
Eyes on overload
Dust
Raining past

Always remembered the jeweller's wire like your vest
In those early days
Rush hour would be no rest
No you go back
I was the little one
Just to provide the jog
And job for reasons some

Yes I don’t forget you
Nor what you sought to do
And yes into my life
You brought strife anew
But without you growth was stinted
With you ideas grew
And in your own sweet way

I write, just because of you

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2005-01-13 03:33 PM

This is a sweet write Dave.

Eric

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-13 03:36 PM

"You brought strife anew
But without you growth was stinted
With you ideas grew
And in your own sweet way

I write, just because of you"

The Yin and Yang of life!
Good one DavePage.

JL

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-01-13 03:44 PM

enjoyed this Dave. Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-01-13 03:53 PM

Dave

"But without you growth was stinted
With you ideas grew
And in your own sweet way

I write, just because of you"

I love the sweet honest feeling of this!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-01-13 03:55 PM

I think this could be deemed
a "dark lightly..."

bittersweet, surely...

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-01-13 04:36 PM

Caught me again Sunshine.

Thought I'd hidden it better.

Thanks all.

Dave

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2005-01-13 11:41 PM

I like this one.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2005-01-14 03:02 PM

Thanks Froggy.

Dave

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