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To Make Memories
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To Make Memories |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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As I make an effort to write my feelings from my heart About you, my sweet love, I don't know where to start There are so many emotions churning around inside of me As I try to write them down for you, my love, to see Being apart as we are now makes it hard our love to show We try proving through many ways, this true love, to each other know The first thing I think of when in the morning I awake At night when I close my eyes in dreams, images you and I make Amazed am I of the emotions, thoughts of you make me feel Though other loves have been and gone, none have ever been so real This love we have found in each other travels across the miles For each of us to feel, our love outweighs the trials When we see each other face to face, as we did a few days past So hard the effort we try to make each memory we share to last The feel of your hands as you gently touch my face The lines and shape of me, with fingertips, you lovingly trace The looks we exchange as gazing into each others eyes Seeing deep inside the other where our inner emotion lies Etched into our memories when hours to each other we talk Of our true love and the paths of this trail of life we walk Our love would become special we knew from the moment we met The chemistry exchanged between us was as strong as it could get We met about this time of year, a few years ago, it's been This love we share has grown each day, more and more since then We have pledged to each other forever our hearts to give To never part, to walk hand in hand, for as long as we both shall live |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like it. Sometimes the heat can burn it out but to temper the heat makes the feeling as strong as steel. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
what a beautiful love song melody this sings-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Etched into our memories when hours to each other we talk Of our true love and the paths of this trail of life we walk" Ethel, you always write so tenderly, so sweetly of your love...I always enjoy reading you! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you Dave and Susan. I appreciate both of your replies. Hugs to you both, Ethel  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much, Sea. I really appreciate your saying that. Hugs, Ethel  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A true love story. Song, and poem. JL |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words paint a vision of lovers intoxicated with each other...I love it... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful as alwasys Ethel.. You are indeed the queen of romance. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This does sing with joy, Ethel!  ....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So hard the effort we try to make each memory we share to last The feel of your hands as you gently touch my face The lines and shape of me, with fingertips, you lovingly trace The looks we exchange as gazing into each others eyes Seeing deep inside the other where our inner emotion lies Etched into our memories when hours to each other we talk You write those precious moments with such love and beauty... excellent! *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes, a given age makes the commitment even more worthwhile... lovely poem, Ethel. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem almost reads like a letter. So natural, tender, and free flowing. Yes, it reads like a beautiful beautiful letter of promised love and true devotion. I really enjoyed reading this poem and thank you for sharing it. -Bob |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you all so very much for liking my poem. I really appreciate all your kind words. hugs, Ethel |
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