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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-13 02:11 PM

weave me a wonder
with your words
silk spun finery
in velvet kiss drape with
the soft of your heart

fibered
with your strength

patterned
after your passion
in glorious array

and

I shall wear you
in silver lined gold
wrapped in every nuance
as the texture
of you
enfolds me

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-01-13 02:13 PM

I shall wear you
in silver lined gold
wrapped in every nuance
as the texture
of you
enfolds me

Ooooooooh, this gave me chills.....the good kind.

Beautiful! hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2005-01-13 02:14 PM

How beautiful, Susan. Thank you.
Hugs,
Ethel

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-01-13 02:19 PM

Yes, Susan...

this is indeed
a poetic

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-01-13 02:21 PM

I'm not sure whether this is one to read last thing at night or not.

Beautiful words.

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-13 02:39 PM

Thank you friends - you warm my heart -

Dave - you make me smile

Hugs

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-01-13 03:11 PM

Yes, indeed... absolutely beautiful! *S*

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2005-01-13 03:14 PM

Wow....beautiful!!!

Eric

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2005-01-13 03:39 PM

DITTO!
Very nice Susan.

JL

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2005-01-13 03:52 PM

I'm up for that

(wink)

kewl sauce ms suzzz

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2005-01-13 04:15 PM

weave me those words
and drape around me
in a coat of chiavlry

aahh
there's still a few good ones left, aint there suzz?

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

11 posted 2005-01-13 04:18 PM

You have woven this poem with beautiful words that making it stunning to read...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2005-01-13 04:37 PM

It is a pleasure to read all your replies - my friends -

yes inkked one, there are some good ones out there -

d- ah, you make me feel saucy-

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

13 posted 2005-01-13 06:49 PM

I like this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2005-01-13 06:51 PM

Beautiful weaving, yourself, Susan!

....jo

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2005-01-13 06:52 PM

mmmmm ... now ma'am... this is delicious..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

16 posted 2005-01-13 09:33 PM

warm smiles and thanks my friends -

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

17 posted 2005-01-14 11:31 PM

This is so beautiful and I am jealous I did not write it! LOL! Dang girl...I thought I was the romantic writer...looks like I just got knocked down a notch or two.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

18 posted 2005-01-15 12:29 PM

EV2 - you be the king, man - 'tis true - and I, this humble bard, I bow to you -

thank you for your heart warming words - they mean a great deal for I truly admire your work -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2005-01-15 01:07 AM

very pretty

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

20 posted 2005-01-15 05:10 AM

This is deeply inspiring, dear Susan!

A keeper!

Love, Margherita

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