"How to hide the ..lack of feel" ( inspired)

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-13 05:59 AM

"How to hide the ..lack of feel"
(title borrowed from pandonov...thank you)

This one inch
that is saved from ache
hides that lack of feel.

Simple thoughts
catch my days
breathe my sighs,
rise a smile

that angles itself in questioning
the words I don't hear,
the touch I don't feel,
the lack of the real.

So I turn back the clock
rewinding film
showing the age as
I am cast out
into the morning emptiness,
fogged by contradiction,
lost in soulful music

waiting
for that other shoe
to drop...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

1 posted 2005-01-13 06:09 AM

wow i do feel this one

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

2 posted 2005-01-13 07:36 AM

maybe go shoelesss?

i don't know, but i do so understand

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-01-13 08:45 AM

I think, we shouldn't be afraid to express what we feel...cuz, this way, ya never know, the alternative is rejection, which is not such a bad thing, when you weigh the never knowing with it wasn't supposed to be's?

Tremendous way to express these feelings.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2005-01-14 12:01 PM

M, this touches

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

5 posted 2005-01-14 12:08 PM

..understood

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

6 posted 2005-01-14 12:54 PM

So much said and expressed in a way so easy to feel.

.....jo

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-01-16 12:08 PM

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

8 posted 2005-01-16 02:44 PM

wonderfully said.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

9 posted 2005-01-16 08:08 PM

Wow....

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2005-01-16 10:13 PM

This is felt and understood.

Mxx

all I can taste is this moment, all I can breathe is your life, cause sooner or later it's over, I just don't want to miss you tonight.~GooGooDolls~

passing shadows
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displaced

11 posted 2005-01-16 10:52 PM

Robert Frazier
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12 posted 2005-01-17 10:39 AM

powerful . . . makes me ache!

Rf

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

13 posted 2005-01-17 01:30 PM

wow..big feeling in the lack of feel....

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

14 posted 2005-01-18 12:54 PM

He's hard to ignore, isn't he! An essential dynamism there.....

....and here. This is excellent, though hard to read because my heart goes out to the poet at the same time the cool assessor of poetry in me likes what he sees.

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