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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-01-13 01:00 AM


Time Machine


What light in yonder pane
doth pierce my heart again,
and again?
This wine is sweet,
from a vine so bitter…
.
Take hold your senses
Let fly the freedom dove
What reward can one have
in this solitude, of love?
Not the lord of the roses,
Nor the lord of all this ground.
None, but the lord of brier-patches…
.
.
Time withered away to stolen island
Where buried treasure surely awaited
Yet, on arrival, with no turning back
No need for lack, not a moment slated
Days now hours, years as months now pass
Reflection ponds force their found truth
This time machine has stolen my youth…
.
.
.

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Ratleader
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1 posted 2005-01-13 01:41 AM


All forward gears and no reverse.....and it ain't on warranty anymore.....

....still we wish. Pick a number of years at random and if I was around then I can say a regret that a time machine might fix....

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-01-13 05:26 AM


very cool write JL
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-01-13 06:51 AM


gives us a whole new meaning to life, doesn't it...now, somehow, even the bad has become a pastel...dust in the wind, but remains part of our soul, which smiles...

Hugs, what a write...enjoyed!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-01-13 07:33 AM


I liked traveling through your poetry in your time machine~

Great write~

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-01-13 10:32 AM





To repeat a poet...
these forums are just resplendent
with more and more talent lately!

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