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iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

0 posted 2005-01-12 09:47 PM

Suppose
     grasses grew high thru asphalt cracks;
Would my memory haunt the tomb
     after a thousand years had lapsed
     with these words spoken silently
     or with your tunes?

While yet today, our moon silently drifts
     over selfish ruins (spoils of tomorrow),
No one hears the beauty it writes --
     life lines written in nite --
     each day harder to read because Earth's worth diminishes.

In black sky, starfire paths (a million lights away)
     twinkle mystery,
     beckon hope.
As I stare intensely, dense vastness overwhelms.
Thoughts focus on summit points,
     hyponotic spectrums followed.

Tomorrow . . . . just another day;
     but forever, Night is wholly hallowed.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-01-12 10:09 PM

I like this one illiana.

Juju

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-01-12 10:14 PM

Thanks, Juju. (happy 2005, by the way!)

.....jo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-01-12 10:15 PM

Excellent write Iliana...
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-01-12 10:16 PM

Thanks heeps, Nancy Lee! (Hope your 2005 started out great and continues that way!!)

.....jo

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-01-12 10:20 PM

Thanks you too. So far my resolution is to find a resilution.

(;
Juju

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2005-01-13 01:14 AM

Perfect!
Great write iliana.

JL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-01-13 05:25 AM

wow! thanks for the repost! love it!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-01-14 02:54 AM

JL, glad you liked it!

Dixie, you're so sweet, thanks!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-01-14 11:39 AM

Reposts can be so enlightening!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2005-01-14 08:37 PM

I enjoyed this Jo!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2005-01-14 08:43 PM

Thanx for sharing this, it just drags you in
and lies you down beneath a night sky...
So peaceful.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2005-01-14 09:29 PM

A treasure. So elequently expressed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

13 posted 2005-01-16 04:50 AM

Bravo!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2005-01-16 10:40 AM

In black sky, starfire paths (a million lights away)
twinkle mystery,
beckon hope.
As I stare intensely, dense vastness overwhelms.

What a wonderfully inspired write, dear Jo!

Beautiful!

Love, Margherita

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

15 posted 2005-01-16 05:00 PM

Beautiful...not just a poem, a statement. I like this very much.

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