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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-01-12 02:37 PM

JL mention an idea for words.

The Window Cleaner and a dirty dusty was not appropriate so I had to go for words.

From the words that had nice suggestion.

You utter words

Flowing across an inner vision unencumbered by care control restriction you fly

Decorating an horizon with whatever

Dave

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Words fight against a flow of inhibitions driven by fear that someone reads your words

All you see is in your head and you see more than most

Your inner vision visualises nerve jumps that pump and punch you

Drawing words on figments of ideas of thoughts you buried that rear their heads allowing no peace

Taking wrong paths to free words in your soul that habit forming lose one of what you feel are "many souls"

Vibrant communication stimulating you alive to face a dead audience that would never know your words

To it's final death and fiddles play and communication stays

In the death of play

Of words

With meaning

Ever to be stayed

LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-01-12 02:45 PM

Your inner vision visualises nerve jumps that pump and punch you

that ol 3rd little eye getting saucy again

David, this was great...enjoyed

DavePage
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2 posted 2005-01-12 02:56 PM

Lee

First person in over 40 years to have made that comment.

It sounds almost Lobsang Rampa.

Dave

JL
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3 posted 2005-01-12 03:57 PM

You-Da-Man!

Great write DavePage. Enjoyed, enjoyed, enjoyed.

.
JL

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-01-12 05:56 PM

Thanks JL.

Dave

Sunshine

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5 posted 2005-01-13 02:23 PM

Thank goodness for JL's push...

Dang, Dave...

it's ALL true...

sigh.

Thank you!

DavePage
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6 posted 2005-01-13 02:30 PM

Thanks Sunshine but I write stuff at times and I come back and it doesn't seem like me, yet it is me and personal thoughts on the barriers we fight to write the words.

I suppose I remember trying to break them and felt no-one understood.

Now I know that everyone understood.

I was the one who didn't.

regards

Dave

Margherita
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7 posted 2005-01-13 05:33 PM

quote:
Words fight against a flow of inhibitions driven by fear that someone reads your words

Your words are an invitation to overcome this kind of inhibitions ...

Ohhhhh, I have a vision of an infinite series of doors opening one after one .... how far can we dare to go and release the flow of words without restrictions?

Thank you for this thoughtful write, Dave!

Love, Margherita

DavePage
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8 posted 2005-01-13 08:57 PM

Thanks Margherita

Sometimes maybe it works

Take care

Dave

MGROVES

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9 posted 2005-01-14 09:25 AM

well i definetly know about writing something and going back and reading it and it dont sound like i could of written it.
thanks for the understanding of words

and the inspiration to look beyond the words

passing shadows
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10 posted 2005-01-14 01:43 PM

very cool write

DavePage
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11 posted 2005-01-14 02:48 PM

Marsha and Passing

Thanks for the comments.

When I was writing a previous reply is was almost like Barry Manilow singing "if someone would have said 'you're not so bad'".

Being different is never easy and if you have any talent it is almost as if you are thrown out of a circle because people have these ideas of structures and limits and not trying.

Thanks

Dave

froggy
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12 posted 2005-01-15 05:43 PM

Wow! I like this.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

DavePage
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13 posted 2005-01-15 06:05 PM

Thanks Froggy

Much appreciated

Dave

iliana
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14 posted 2005-01-16 12:57 PM

I like your honesty, Dave. So much insight!

......jo

MGROVES

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15 posted 2005-01-16 02:52 AM

came back again for a little insight

DavePage
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16 posted 2005-01-16 06:59 AM

Thanks.

I try to be honest.

Dave

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