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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-12 08:06 AM

pale limb tree
sways with wind
spring at the roots
brings nectar to beard
of meadow

sky speak whispers
move cloud pillows
to earthside floor
the antelope runs
from the puma

but is captured
doe eye submission
to gentle teeth
that savor
and never devour

does the woman speak
of jesus
or only heaven
when she sips
shiver harp music

from the sacred waterfall
_______________

Dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-12 08:13 AM

perhaps she speaks of both...as one entity?

Morning D

so good to see you
wishing you a great day....
thank you for the slow sips of you

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-01-12 08:26 AM

from the sacred waterfall
--------------------------

Indeed sacred and a most precious gift it is. Now, you just knew this one was going to get my attention didn't you.

Such soothing images you convey in this D.

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

3 posted 2005-01-12 08:29 AM

dark sranger superb write this mornin my friend

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-12 08:40 AM

but is captured
doe eye submission
to gentle teeth
that savor
and never devour

~*~

I cannot describe
all of the images
that come forth
from this, just let
me say, it was the
strongest of all stanzas...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-12 10:52 AM

Mmmmmmm D- very sensual this - I love the images and can feel them - and the waterfall-it dances in shimmering beauty - lovely

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2005-01-12 10:54 AM

Maybe she just speaks of wanting more?

as always.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-01-14 09:33 AM

she takes her pleasure from where she can, like many

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-01-14 10:31 AM

read this again with amber eyes and a purrrrr

Oh give me a home, where the antelope roam-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-01-14 01:42 PM

nicely written

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2005-01-14 08:15 PM

Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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