Midnight Broach (Duet with ThisDiamond)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-01-14 10:53 PM

Oh friend of night and darkness dwell,
amongst the skies where comets soar.
Amongst the stealth of dawn and night
as moonbeams dust a wooded floor.

And gathered up a bottle full
Each jeweled delight in lumined stir
An onyx bed of evening still
In gaze her eyes eclipsed in blur

And from the flask of crystal sheer
unto the palm of silken feel
A drop shall fall and fill from tears
that which shall come of one's appeal.

Yet there returns enchantment's call
To twinkle skies of distant dream
No matter what takes turn at all
Alight in more than it may seem.

And from the flight of nightly air
a sigh shall grace the moistened lip
of she who dreams in slumber’s flair
and from the glass partakes a sip.

Her eyes closed softly might partake
The certain pleasures given in.
Yet as the stars to slumber wake,
The morn assures that night has been

And from the chill of Winter’s eve
a fire shall burn within the breast
of she as dreams do wrest and leave
before the morn is born and blessed.
...as midnight broaches...

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2005-01-14 11:10 PM

OMG!Bravo! No more need be said!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-01-14 11:49 PM

Just beautiful !!

Library bound this awesome duet goes!
Hugs to both of you. Chris

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-15 12:37 PM

The two of you in a duet - of course it produces the exquisite - bravo dear friends

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-01-15 12:40 PM

What a wonderful, enchanting duet, you two!

.....jo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-01-15 01:00 AM

oh...you two are good together

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2005-01-15 05:12 AM

You two, my friends, composed an enchanting melody of the night here.

Love, Margherita

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2005-01-15 10:08 AM

beautifully done...you two write flaw-less-ly together....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-16-2005 09:24 PM).]

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-15 03:29 PM

Beautiful1

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-01-15 03:32 PM

Keep it up...
the smiles
are growing...

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2005-01-15 04:31 PM

midnight broaches.........

pristine beauty throughout

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2005-01-15 07:22 PM

Thanx to each of you for the kind replies...
and a special thanx to my little partner
who graces me with a talent that is far
beyond my own...though she won't admit that!

Thanx K. for the moments, always a pleasure,
even when I have to use trickery..hehe

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2005-01-16 12:27 PM

So very pleased the way this piece turned out, and appreciate the kind replies from everyone.

It is always a thrill to write with such a masterful poet as The Magnus.

Thank you Barry.
TD

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2005-01-16 09:03 PM

Beautifully done you two!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

14 posted 2005-01-18 08:45 AM

wonderfully magic and in sync....lovely read

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

15 posted 2005-01-18 09:03 PM

Now how smooth is this?

my oh my

you two are cello and violin

(and this one begged to be read aloud, so I did--my daughter loved it)

thanks you two

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

16 posted 2005-01-18 09:19 PM

what a cool duet!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2005-01-24 12:45 PM

What a great collaboration!!! *S* You weave your words together wonderfully! *S*

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