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An Alter
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An Alter |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An Alter She sits upon a throne of goal A phantom of a longing soul A spirit born within a sigh The working of the ego I Placed within an Ivy tower Symbol of romances power She took her place the queen of style And answered to the king of wile The essence of my ecstasy The flower of my fantasy The omni of the world of dream The symbol of forever’s theme An Eden built as God had done And rebuilt in the eye of one It is the force of Adam’s coup That lives of course each morning’s dew For Eden never spoke of death And stays the essence of Gods breath |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
An Eden built as God had done And rebuilt in the eye of one It is the force of Adam’s coup That lives of course each morning’s dew Nature at her finest sleek and flowing white gown, even has those moody moments....but even then, oh how beautiful she is....smiles and hugs and you...my friend and poet, never cease to awaken my senses...touching a strong hold of a great wilderness of kindness and kindred souls, untouched and yet to find.... Marvelous Mocha Cappachino this morning sir |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
morning sir, and a pleasurable one it is after reading this fine piece  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For Eden never spoke of death And stays the essence of Gods breath ~*~ For some reason, Sy, this jerked a tear...or two...   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It is a pleasure to read your replies. MGROVES Your pleasure is my pleasure. Sunshine,   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"An Eden built as God had done And rebuilt in the eye of one It is the force of Adam’s coup That lives of course each morning’s dew For Eden never spoke of death And stays the essence of Gods breath" Morning Sy..my this is SO beautiful.. yet touches on the melancholy side. Much enjoyed as always ... ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. an invincible summer. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Love your hugs and tea. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
*sigh* ... into my library this beauty goes. A delight to read ~ thankyou Seymour. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you dear. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully written Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
An Eden built as God had done And rebuilt in the eye of one It is the force of Adam’s coup That lives of course each morning’s dew For Eden never spoke of death And stays the essence of Gods breath I love all of your poem, and the ending is perfect. Hugs, Ethel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well...the first stanza said to me that was one very "into herself woman" that I really didn't want to know, but you saved her as you went along and I actually liked her at the end.  Sitting on the throne of goal, been there, done that Sy, lonely place. Great write this Tuesday's exercise m'friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you friend. Ethel Glad you enjoyed. Sharon, Yes it is an exercise. It helps to make you wise. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
It is all ways fun to read your poems. Juju |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
WOW, Sy! Your words captured me from the very beginning!! It's completely and absolutely beautiful! "For Eden never spoke of death And stays the essence of Gods breath" -- BREATHTAKING! Thank you for sharing this one....and I will be keeping it in my library!!  ...Becka |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
quite a touching piece Sy |
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