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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
when you came into my life that day a smile upon my face found it's way a smile turned to laughter then joy to my heart soon after then along came desire with such a burning fire something i never felt before as my heart had locked it's door and my soul did hide very deep inside as the fire grew along came passion i never knew then love as from heaven above my life changed gave past a shove now your gone no more will i feel joy,laughter, passion desire or love that's real again my spirit's broken my soul which was once awoken has taken my heart and spirit deep inside from all the pain forever they'll hide i'll keep your memory close to me as pain and tears remember the love that use to be |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Darlin, been there felt that, and the only answer I can derive is this...although she didn't love you the way you loved her, you've had the blessing of knowing true love...perhaps then, it wasn't the time, place or person, but by darn, you knew love...and in that, it will be refined forever, and if someday you are blessed with your twin...then you will love like that again, only better, perhaps more responsibly, more realistically, and less fantasy? For me it gave a whole new meaning to, "I'd rather have loved and lost, then to never have loved at all" ??? Yes...smiles and hugs To me, that moment, however brief, was worth a lifetime.... But by God...you've known love, first hand, which is something a lot of people, have never known or felt. Does that make sense. By the way, I could tell by your poem, your joys, sorrows, feelings of loss are straight from the heart...tremendous write my friend. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank you lee. i have alot of respect for you thanks for your comforting words. i still have the strength to fly and move on,and maybe someday find one who truly loves me instead of "love for you none for me" i believe my heart just wont let me go and grow away from what keeps the tears near. and yes it took many years to feel what real love feels like, maybe its just fear of past failure and pain that wont let me move forword or take a chance. or enjoy the new found love. well thanks again so much for all your replies and reading my thoughts |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES A sober write but well done. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
my spirit's broken my soul which was once awoken has taken my heart and spirit deep inside from all the pain forever they'll hide Ah, but that's the thing about our souls...they never hide...regroup is what they do. When you least expect it, they lift up our hearts and make our spirits shine. Honest.  Be well dear poet. Great write. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ Gustavo Adolfo Becquer |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lee said it all, and said it quite well. I'll defer to her comment, but thank you for the poetic efforts in revealing the tear stains. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou all for your replies |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
KEEP YOUR HEAD UP FRIEND and Youll find the woman of your dreams when you least exspect to. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks for the replies but i am female and my pain is from a male. i like females but i am only into males as a mate. lol maybe thats my problem nah dont think so |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
foot in mouth never tasted so good my DEAR. forgive me for adding two to many letters |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
lol you are forgiven and thanks for the smile lee and soulfisher. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A pouring-out of your soul. Sad fact of living, yet happiness to have the ability to experience these heartfelt emotions. Excellent write. JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hugs...hope for good things for you...so true that romantic love does not feel its fulfillment until love is given and received in equal measures...James |
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