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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2005-01-10 10:55 PM


Out of the dark,
the rain soaked night,
the land bathed in snow
did you hear the world talking
once more in the shadows of
its own existance,
laughing like the
careless mother of us all.
I hear whispers from the night
that fall upon me,
wishing me awake
so I may fall,
whispers that lead
to a new overture of feelings
landing square upon my breast
anchoring in my heart.
Nothing can be so bland
as to wake in the morning
feeling little about it all
only to have to walk,
walk to the shadows that laugh
at your pain, for once again
you may be the joke of the day.

© Copyright 2005 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-01-10 10:57 PM


what a sad ending - felt this

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2005-01-10 11:09 PM


I guess that life is just what we make of it.
No, nothing is certain. It's a game of chance. So, make it exciting!
Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2005-01-12 01:51 AM


Nothing can be so bland
as to wake in the morning
feeling little about it all
only to have to walk,
walk to the shadows that laugh
at your pain, for once again
you may be the joke of the day.

Ouchie!!!!
I know this feeling, and it's not funny!
And so it goes~  


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2005-01-12 05:17 AM


I know what you mean
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-01-14 10:13 AM



I'm often the joke of the day...
I just turned it around to fact...



It will get better...

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