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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-10 07:19 AM


Speaking of Towers

I built myself a tower of seem
Of multi fabric power of dream
The furniture of memories wood
Carved of patterns understood

And in the yard a wishing well
The bucket made of tortes shell
Whose waters ran of clear incite
And sparkled like the stars at night

My path was like a rainbows scene
Where grass grew forty shades of green
With flowered hues a mirrored sky
That made me heave a heart felt sigh

It is a state of ecstasy
Built upon a fantasy
A theater of my inner mind
A goldmine, we all seek to find

It takes a loving caring heart
To make this precious work of art
And takes a pinch of droll in dole
To season up the goal of soul



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-01-10 07:31 AM


A theater of my inner mind
A goldmine, we all seek to find


A you my friend, are a true Masterpiece
One very cuddly and wise

Love your marvelous grins which beam like a lighthouse through the lexis of your words.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-01-10 08:44 AM


"And takes a pinch of droll in dole"

Morning Sy, and I sure feel as though
I could use a pinch this morning
Maybe make me wake up a bit faster, ya think?
Love this morning's write.
~Morning hugs, smiles & tea, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2005-01-10 08:44 AM


Wonderfully descriptive words Sy.  Much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-01-10 08:51 AM


LeeJ,
You are a sweetheart and the top of the morning to ya.

Nancy,
Maybe a would help.

scorpio,
Nice reply, thank you.


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2005-01-10 09:15 AM


My path was like a rainbows scene
Where grass grew forty shades of green
With flowered hues a mirrored sky
That made me heave a heart felt sigh

.
wonderful rhyming~~



Janet Marie
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6 posted 2005-01-10 09:23 AM


A theater of my inner mind
----------------

and I want a front row seat for the show.

(Randy wants popcorn-extra butter) LOL

*ww*


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just out of reach
7 posted 2005-01-10 09:46 AM


And in the yard a wishing well
The bucket made of tortes shell
Whose waters ran of clear incite
And sparkled like the stars at night


I have lots of pennies saved up. May I toss some into your lovely wishing well?
Enjoyed this Seymour. hugs, Chris

saved_by_grace
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8 posted 2005-01-10 10:04 AM


This was beautiful, Seymour, loved every word!!!

Have a blessed day!! --  Becka

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2005-01-10 10:11 AM


My path was like a rainbows scene
Where grass grew forty shades of green
With flowered hues a mirrored sky
That made me heave a heart felt sigh

~*~

Now, you put that line in there JUST because you know I know you know that I love the color green...in all of its 40 shades and then some!


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-01-10 03:55 PM


Maureen,
Thank you dear.

JM,
I'll send two tickets, winkiewinkie stinky


Chris,
Hugs back and thank you.

saved,
Glad you liked it.

Sunshine,
And you are shade 41. Hugs

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