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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The breath of your words slide easily, land softly, delicately upon ears that yearn to hear, be caressed and stroked gently, ever gently. Each thought forming a wave’s peak as the crest looms overhead, waiting to heartily fall, drench and devour...till my soul hungers again... Leave not the goblet that I might quench my thirst of you. For it’s linger shall sustain me, keep me there in want of that which is you. Though moons now set the eve and stars caress the evening sky, my smile dances, my breath halts and I count each moment until you linger once more... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Though moons now set the eve and stars caress the evening sky, my smile dances, my breath halts and I count each moment until you linger once more..." Oh Barry...you know this is one huge *SIGH* In the midst of winter, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Leave not the goblet that I might quench my thirst of you. For it’s linger shall sustain me, keep me there in want of that which is you. Oooh La La !! You sure know how to write "real purdy" mister!  Hugs! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you its YOUR turn to make the WOMEN swoon |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice way to linger or malinger... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How eloquent the blush of this placed perfectly in rhythm with the waves. Love this one. TD |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! Passion flows eloquently from your fingers as you caress the keyboard with words that set a fire in the hearts and on blue pages where these hearts reside...Your talent to leave this reader breathless and sighing amazes me...Well done, dear friend...*hugs* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Barry - this is fine - mighty fine - it stirs the heart to flutter - your muse is most lucky to have such a man to inspire- beautifully penned dear Sir -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Though moons now set the eve and stars caress the evening sky, my smile dances, my breath halts and I count each moment until you linger once more... Oh goodness, Barry, this is so dreamy, with the moon, stars and the dancing smile!! Just beautiful!! Hugs, Ethel |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
What a treasure this is.  OH so beautiful... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how romantic! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Made this little heart go "pitter..patter".... Let your muse inspire you more...I enjoy the rewards from it  Nice Photo ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice romantice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ This is touching ... so very, very touching~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yep, you do write real purdy, so romantic, a gal's dream |
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