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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-01-09 08:29 PM


Excuse me Suzie...


Aren't you the one
that said we could have
some fun on a Saturday night,
and after only one kiss and a
cute giggle (or was that a purr)
you fell asleep in my arms just
one kiss after I turned
out the lights.


JamesLee
January10
2005
Thinking
about her.
Still in
Guam for
a few more
days.

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-01-09 08:31 PM


Hey James...you have been missed!
Sure you didn't rock her to sleep?
Cute write.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-01-09 08:50 PM


Hi Enchantress...still in Guam for five more days but I have found a few computers by now...I sure miss my sweetheart...a lot...James
Magnus
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3 posted 2005-01-09 09:40 PM


Not being there does make the heart grow
fonder, doesn't it?  Enjoy the sparse
scenery, unless of course you scuba dive..
An interesting place...been there many times
over the last 30 plus years.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-09 10:17 PM


Had to smile at this -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2005-01-09 10:19 PM


Oh yes...well said...romance and desire flow sweetly from your words...well done...

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-01-10 06:26 AM


James, that should be a compliment to you
you are so comforting that she went right into dreamland beside you  

of course, I know that doesn't help you any LOL

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2005-01-12 05:59 PM


Thank you Magnus, Susan, Startime and passing shadows for the nice responses....
Yes Magnus I am a certified diver, but no time this time...
passing shadows...its all good...hugs can be a heaven of their own...when shared with the right person...James

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