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Morning

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-09-2005 03:57 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


A dream gone

What life is lost
To the dead of night

The dawn sun
Red in the Eastern sky
A blue haze
On new snow

The door closed
With an opened eye

With whom did I spend
The silent hours

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Denise
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1 posted 01-09-2005 05:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very pretty, John!
EagleScorpion
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2 posted 01-10-2005 12:11 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

this is ****ing beautiul
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 01-10-2005 12:22 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

hmmm..with whom, yes

nicely done

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Good read.

:-)
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A dream gone

What life is lost---------life
To the dead of night------dead, night

The dawn sun-----------dawn
Red in the Eastern sky ---red
A blue haze--------------blue
On new snow--------------white

The door closed------closed
With an opened eye---opened

With whom did I spend
The silent hours

---all

beautiful but lonely.
 
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