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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2005-01-09 03:20 PM



Three Faces Of Eternity: Fantasy

Transparent the film between reality and desire
When the mind offers life to love
Being only this, nurtured and fed by heartbeat
On a bridge between the folds of together
Boundless these wings sensate in pearl pulse
That now conjures in limitless ovations for the soul

A creation of gifts whispered to the intimate of want
Told as the strum of fingers augmented every breath
Attributes of taste and scent given word flavors in tender moans
Sharing constellations of pagan beauty and sacred fidelity
In a moment still, here beside you that I whisper the future
Forever kissed upon your hands as I lead you down these ivory halls

Introducing us to every season, gleaming and new
Wetted romance in the melt of snow, my eyes dance fascinated
To discover you in ways to pass the days in sable purr
And everything we are is clothed only in sun and moon glow
Tantalized of energized outlooks, peaks the coat of natural curiosity
And we smile more together imagining what might be eternity

Copyright Kkh 01/09/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2005-01-09 03:43 PM


just beyong the veil of sky
eternity whispers

Magnus
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2 posted 2005-01-09 05:30 PM


In a moment still, here beside you that I whisper the future
Forever kissed upon your hands as I lead you down these ivory halls

And I know that you would do this...

Beautiful pieces of poetry for dining on
when outside the weather beckons and cries
for one to attend...But, how can one when
such words are given the eyes to bask upon?

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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-01-09 08:16 PM


Wonderful write TD. Much enjoyed. Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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4 posted 2005-01-09 08:20 PM


quote:
A creation of gifts whispered to the intimate of want
Told as the strum of fingers augmented every breath
Attributes of taste and scent given word flavors in tender moans
Sharing constellations of pagan beauty and sacred fidelity
In a moment still, here beside you that I whisper the future
Forever kissed upon your hands as I lead you down these ivory halls


* yes, yes, yes

JL
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5 posted 2005-01-10 02:56 PM


"To discover you in ways to pass the days in sable purr
And everything we are is clothed only in sun and moon glow
Tantalized of energized outlooks, peaks the coat of natural curiosity
And we smile more together imagining what might be eternity"

Oh yeah... The visual within your words strike a melodic cord.
Wonderful write This Diamond.

JL

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-01-10 03:03 PM


well, you've got my standing ovation

absolute brilliant writting

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