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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Across the vast and wide divide between two lovers waiting stance A melody does softly glide till eyes do meet in fiery glance. The raging winds that leap the gap do echo well their aching thought and brings to air a rending clap of passion’s thunders sorely sought. Till gusts of chance do lightly blow and bring from each a stifled moan two loves shall waltz in heated glow and soar as one on breezes flown. And then the world shall grasp and hide the light that jostles early morn as one they arch in lusty glide till what once was is then reborn. [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-09-2005 03:29 PM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Nicely done! Great rhyme scheme and imagery. Long distance relationships can be so fervent. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home, Stranger... you've NOT lost your touch! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very enchanting, my friend. Ir sure is good to see you and read you!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly flowing. Eric |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Barry. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
It always pleases me to see your name as I know I am in for a treat - beautifully done Barry - Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi very Barry....I've missed you! This poem was enchanted!  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice write Barry!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
may i tip my hat? and echo the others? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
two loves shall waltz in heated glow and soar as one on breezes flown Ah, there you are my friend !! So good to read your wonderful words once more. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome home Barry...  You have been missed! ~Big hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a treat to read... excellent write! *S* |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Enchantingly beautiful...Your words reflect a love beyond time and distance...*sigh* to dream such a perfect vision is to live true love...Well done, dear friend...the romance of your heart always touches the soul...*hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A delight to read. Missed you pal. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i have missed you very nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Magnus, this was so fanciful and meaningful...a very good feeling one gets while reading such harmony and rhyme....good jobber Now I know why your wearing a white hat....you ol cowboy at heart you Hugs |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
No calm before this storm and hopefully not too much damage in its aftermath. Enjoyed |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
had to come back, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Barry I have been enchanted by your words since the very first time I read one of your poems. You never cease to amaze me. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Now that's my kind of a poem, Magnus. Great job. I will keep this one. CG |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Across the vast and wide divide between two lovers waiting stance A melody does softly glide till eyes do meet in fiery glance." This was really nice Barry!!! Loved the rhythm...  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write! JL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely done. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Barry this just made my #1 must read poem of the day list. I abso(friggin)lutey love this! Bravo my friend. Perfection flows from your pen. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ummm, ummm good! Just my cup of romance soup for the night! ....jo |
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