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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-01-09 10:21 AM


Was a lifetime worth it all?
The rise right before the fall.
I'm fading out alone.
Starting to feel the bitterness of alone,
And as we speak we turn to stone.
I think I'm fading out alone.
I can't go on without you,
I don't know what else to do.
And I'm fading out alone.
Was a lifetime worth it all?
Yes..you're worth it all.
I'm fading out alone....

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-01-09 10:29 AM


Snowflake you sound terribly down. Now that's no way to start the New Year! "Pick yourself up .... dust yourself off...and start all over again."   hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-01-09 10:49 AM


Dear Hot Flakes, this may sound rather cavalier of me, but "off with the old and on with the new"!

You sure have a way of expressing yourself that grabs your readers!


EA

Copperbell
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3 posted 2005-01-09 11:17 AM


  

I wish I could say something that would make everything easy- There's a time to grieve in life and a time to move forward. A person needs to grieve.  You know what Kyle, one of the biggest lessons I've learned in life is to learn how to be whole without a partner.  It was so hard because I felt so dependant, but I needed to explore who I was and I needed to heal, and I needed to learn to love myself.  It took time and faith, but I did and I'm so glad - the love I have is stronger than it ever would have been had I not gone through the process. Take care -  

Startime55
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4 posted 2005-01-09 11:28 AM


Pain fills each word of this poem....I have to concure with all those before me...life does continue and the heart does heal in time...Copperbell said it perfectly...remember many share your pain and understand how you feel...

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-01-09 12:07 PM


I too must agree with copperbell - what wise words -

this aches and it reaches and touches others - I felt it deeply and it is well understood - you are so not alone in being alone -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
6 posted 2005-01-09 10:21 PM


heh...if i could live without this girl i wouldnt have wrote this

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

Copperbell
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7 posted 2005-01-10 09:33 AM



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-01-10 10:19 AM


Sending hugs your way Kyle.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2005-01-10 01:55 PM


after awhile, you get use to alone...and you never take companionship for granted ever again~~

have a hug
M

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