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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-01-08 05:17 PM



Tell me what I've missed
in the middle of twiddle
and thumb these past days?

I return to find peace of mind
in the wrest of turmoil's want
and need
yes to feed upon the mind of
his, hers, and yours
begging,

just a little more...


~tier

© Copyright 2005 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-08 05:51 PM


Well, you're coming home enough
that it is a treasure to read you...

jwesley
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2 posted 2005-01-08 07:15 PM


Really liked this, me friend....very well done.

jwesley

Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-01-08 07:17 PM


Much enjoyed -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-01-08 07:21 PM


It is so good having you around more often Tier!
hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2005-01-08 08:08 PM


a enjoyable read
something to ponder

namaste

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-01-08 10:07 PM


nice
Ericc
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7 posted 2005-01-09 03:00 PM


I loved this....great write!

Eric

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8 posted 2005-01-09 03:49 PM


Nice write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
9 posted 2005-01-10 09:19 PM


I hope you know how very good this is, Tier.
Sunshine
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10 posted 2005-01-14 10:16 AM



Good enough for a return
to the top...


Juju
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11 posted 2005-01-14 11:59 AM


I liked this poem alot.


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

JL
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12 posted 2005-01-14 01:48 PM


Enjoyed.

JL


LeeJ
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13 posted 2005-01-14 02:37 PM


good one!!!!


DavePage
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14 posted 2005-01-14 02:41 PM


Gets the mind thinking.

A lot unsaid on this.

Dave

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15 posted 2005-01-15 07:31 AM


very nice


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