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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-01-08 09:39 AM



So Truly Special You Are

Felt like I was in your arms
Here listening to you sing
As I embrace the rhythm
The pleasure you bring

I felt touched deep inside
Playing your songs again
Voice with sensual flow
Soothes away the pain

Fingers playing magically
I feel you from head to toe
Caressing your words
With passionate tempo

Uplifted upon every chord
From those gifts from afar
Creating loving desire
So truly special you are

HopeĀ©2004

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Soulfisher
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1 posted 2005-01-08 10:07 AM


VERY WELL DONE HOPE I COULD FIND MYSELF DRIFTING WITH YOU AS YOU WERE CAUGHT UP IN THOUGHT OF AN AND OLD LOVE
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-01-08 01:33 PM


very pretty piece
DavePage
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3 posted 2005-01-08 02:04 PM


Nothing like a Great White Shark, Hope.

Soothing words - slightly quiet for you.

Dave

JL
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4 posted 2005-01-08 04:23 PM


WoW-Wee!  Wonderful write!

JL

Startime55
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5 posted 2005-01-08 04:26 PM


The music of love flows so passionately from your fingers...a Stunning write Hope...

*Alli4000*
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6 posted 2005-01-08 05:30 PM


Fantastic write Hope! *smile*

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2005-01-12 02:18 AM


Loved the rhythm and flow Hope,
and the sentiment most of all~

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