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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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It might have been cats were hated rats were free to roam, venerated than a twist of fate occured what of cat have you lately heard? One who brushed Beth's sheltered leg became an ornament in throne room steads from a group of kittens not adults cats which learned the smell of a villan rat smelled a rodent in the chamber corner where pies were prodded by Mr Horner Now kittens don't wear mittens naturally their moms don't wash them either with their paws exposed, they soon cried but Mom had their mittens faithfully dried... Might be that cats were once hated they knew to wash mittens unabated. On a change in fate for floor board pests? wonder if Beth's cat ever had a night's rest! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-08-2005 10:01 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh the love of cats! I do miss mine but couldn't bring them to my new house because the owner has a goldfish pond. anyway, that's not the point here...good write Martin I enjoyed |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
changed the order of lines in stanza 2 for a more fluid read..I had a faithful cat too unfortunately gone 3 years now...and others I had to leave behind in Italy. |
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