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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-01-07 08:45 PM


Such a Fool

Lilies grow near my lake.
In a secrete garden,
Located in my heart.

The sun shines all day long
While a mist lingers
on the waters surface

Frogs sing softly again
Harminize with the wind
how it tickles my ears

But I am such a fool
I lock the gate door shut


Juju

© Copyright 2005 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-01-07 08:47 PM


do you still have the key?

Susan

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2005-01-07 10:34 PM


Oh The key?
Now I search for it
Somewhere else inside of me.

I wonder
Wonder if I'll find
a way to conquer my fear

So till then
then, when I find it
I'll probably be a fool

-Juju

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-01-08 01:38 PM


good write here!
scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2005-01-08 02:58 PM


Find the key..and keep it safe..well written.

believe in what your heart feels...

*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
5 posted 2005-01-08 11:18 PM


Enjoyed this Juju!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2005-01-09 12:11 PM


We all have been fools sometime or another...I have been one lately....Love makes us all fools..blinds our logical way of thinking.

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Juju
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In your dreams
7 posted 2005-01-11 07:35 PM


Thank you ps, scorpio, alli, and romantic heart. Its nice to hear from you, romantic Heart. (I am not here often and I have this week off so smile!)

Thanx again
Juju

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