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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2005-01-07 07:47 PM


‘twas a kiss that awoke this heart of mine,
from the sleep that death had brought to it,
for long before this, I hath chosen thine,
yet love deemed this heart beneath unfit.

The date of love hath passed so long before,
like Summer’s warm touch on Winter’s bliss,
yet it lives through dormant dreams no more,
for love was shown through a simple kiss.

What a kiss it was to a wounded heart,
though it lacked in time it governed love,
for it’s power tore night and day apart,
to prove to thee that none reigns above.

It was though waking to the sun clad sea,
as the notes of song birds fill the air,
and drops of nectar fulfilling thy plea,
‘twas the kiss of love, that I must swear!

© Copyright 2005 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-01-07 08:44 PM


like Summer’s warm touch on Winter’s bliss,
I use Wynter Bliss as a pseudonym

enjoyed your words

M

Susan
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2 posted 2005-01-07 08:45 PM


love's kiss - nicely written

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

garysgirl
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3 posted 2005-01-08 04:43 AM


This is so beautiful..from the title
to the finish.
Hugs,
Ethel

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2005-01-08 11:54 PM


From one romantic soul to another, enjoyed reading the bleeding of your heart....

~ARh

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-01-09 08:41 PM


Enjoyed...James
Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2005-01-10 07:45 PM


What simple joyful bliss hast thou found here within this kiss... Beautiful. -Bob
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