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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-01-07 06:56 PM



In that Moment




It was all could be done in that moment
trying to look past the fantasy
into the beyond, eager for best,

trusting luck
hoping that some good fortune
would guide my eye

I knew, somewhere, their home was up there
but the brilliance of this moment
blinded me,
so faith took over, and then

I snapped…

Now counting starred points,
Noting sure angel’s aura
All's right in sun’s time

Warming nests, squirrels napping
They’ll work to eat, soon enough



Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-01-07 07:04 PM


Karilea/sissie

How lovely!!!!  

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2 posted 2005-01-07 08:53 PM


What an amazing photograph - some moments are like that -

Enjoyed this -

Susan

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3 posted 2005-01-07 08:57 PM


There are moments, and there are moments......

.....you've caught both here.

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4 posted 2005-01-07 08:58 PM


There....does that make up for my Clinton joke?

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5 posted 2005-01-07 09:21 PM


Beautiful pictures and words to match.

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2005-01-07 10:12 PM


this is so great
made me think of little kids standing underneath that tree, dreaming up what could be in that nest...

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7 posted 2005-01-07 10:16 PM


I like the poem and the picture
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Juju

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8 posted 2005-01-07 11:13 PM


BEAUTIFUL!!!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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9 posted 2005-01-08 09:25 AM


that picture, reminds me of my view while laying down underneath the tree in my back yard, looking up

and the write...you've captured the moment well

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10 posted 2005-01-08 09:59 AM


SUNSHINE YOU PEN YOUR PICTURES VERY WELL MY DEAR. THANKS FOR ALLOWING US TO SARE YOUR THOUGHTS THIS MORNING.
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11 posted 2005-01-08 10:29 AM


Now counting starred points,
Noting sure angel’s aura
All's right in sun’s time


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And you would know wouldnt you.

ya know too, Im loving that pic.

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12 posted 2005-01-08 10:36 AM


Momemt captured most beautifully in your words

Hope

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13 posted 2005-01-08 04:31 PM


Beautiful Kari, both your words and the image. You always captured the moment so beautifully.

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
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14 posted 2005-01-08 04:33 PM


What an amazing moment in time you share with us...To feel your words so strongly is to enter the moment with you...Wonderful...

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15 posted 2005-01-08 04:38 PM


Amazing write.  
But made me hungry for roasted hot nuts.
Enjoyed.

JL

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16 posted 2005-01-08 04:58 PM


This is just SO beautiful Karilea!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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17 posted 2005-01-09 10:39 AM


nice read
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18 posted 2005-01-09 03:02 PM


Great, great write.

Eric

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19 posted 2005-01-09 04:00 PM


*starred points*
yes

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20 posted 2005-01-09 05:13 PM


So lovely, Kari!
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21 posted 2005-01-09 05:23 PM


Sure glad that this got bumped back up, I would have missed a beautiful poem..

Very nice, picture and words...
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22 posted 2005-01-09 05:27 PM


Oh, but yes they will...just as you are...
giving us tidbits of words to dine on and
store for a winter's day.

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23 posted 2005-01-09 06:14 PM


This was so beautiful, Sunshine!  Thank you for posting it today...it helped lighten my heart.   God bless...

Becka

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24 posted 2005-01-11 04:10 AM


Beautiful pic and poem, lady.

Looks mighty cold in your neck o' the woods, but hey, it's raining cats and dogs here!


Corinne

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25 posted 2005-01-11 09:25 AM


gorgeous


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26 posted 2005-01-14 04:18 PM



Thank you, everyone...
we're still cold, and quite icy...

so the picture remains...

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