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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-07 05:10 PM





And as the cold settles in
once again,
my eyes
see a new world,
the glaze of ice
a yesterday thought
replaced by shades of lavender
and lacy moments
to thread my tomorrows
into  significance~~


M
p.s.thank you for the photo


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-01-07 05:54 PM


Beautiful Maureen!!!
Both the words and the pic...lovely indeed.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-01-07 09:02 PM


this is exquisite -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2005-01-07 09:22 PM


Maureen,

And as the cold settles in
once again…
a new world,

the glaze of ice
a yesterday thought
replaced by shades of lavender

and lacy moments
to thread tomorrows
into  significance~~


Good

John

Beki
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4 posted 2005-01-08 01:50 AM


"lacy moments
to thread my tomorrows
into  significance~~"

I love these lines!

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2005-01-08 02:28 AM


This is so pretty~
As always, you weave your words so fine, Maureen.


pandonov
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6 posted 2005-01-08 04:19 AM


beautiful
garysgirl
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7 posted 2005-01-08 04:28 AM


Maureen, this is so beautiful....
the picture as well as your painting
of words. So, so pretty.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-01-08 09:09 AM


I do love the view from your eyes
bslicker
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9 posted 2005-01-08 11:57 AM


good write M

(((((M)))))

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

HopeS
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10 posted 2005-01-08 12:50 PM


Maureen this was so beautifully expressed

Hope

NewEnglandlazurlu
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11 posted 2005-01-08 03:36 PM


Hi Maureen, this is spectacular. It is what I see and feel when I look out my kitchen window.

You are such a wonderful writer.
hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Sunshine
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12 posted 2005-01-08 03:39 PM


...a yesterday thought
replaced by shades of lavender
and lacy moments
to thread my tomorrows
into  significance~~

~*~

My muse is green...

Dark Angel
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13 posted 2005-01-08 04:03 PM


a yesterday thought
replaced by shades of lavender
and lacy moments
to thread my tomorrows
into  significance~~


Wonderful Maureen and I love the image as well.

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

JL
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14 posted 2005-01-08 04:05 PM


Looking inward does do the soul good.
Enjoyed!!

JL


Startime55
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15 posted 2005-01-08 04:13 PM


Ahhhh yes...I so love the view from your heart...

*Alli4000*
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16 posted 2005-01-08 11:11 PM


This is lovely - and I like the pic!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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