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Silent Spaces |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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And in the silent spaces between each heartbeat, breath, the depth and breadth of knowledge gathers dust awaiting touch. Silently it cries and begs a hold back of sensation, stillness to receive, and silence to believe like a man waits to undress the woman of his choosing. Too soon and I can’t feel the full impact of worth, and too late it gets returned until another birth and I listen now more than then and touch with mind unleashed my own silent spaces between each heartbeat, breath. There are things I can’t believe going on in heaven’s scheme because I feel but cannot hear each syllable quite clear but always I’m rewarded with symbols of real love. No haphazard pick and pay at a hyper store but years of preparation to receive and to believe your face is my symbol, your touch my knowledge base, and all of this I know today because love undresses soul! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“your face is my symbol, your touch my knowledge base, and all of this I know today because love undresses soul! “ Wonderful write! Beautiful close. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This is SO nicely written Helen...great job!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And in the silent spaces between each heartbeat, breath, the depth and breadth of knowledge gathers dust awaiting touch. love your writing, Helen~ M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you so much JL, Alli, and M, for the read and for kindly commenting. Much appreciated. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
such imagery! I love your mind! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Dixie - my mind is the mind of a woman in love and I think we both know that it's not a mind worth having sometimes. |
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