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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In a moment’s boundary I, through myself across the sand in mind to see the long boats drift across the early tide brown stretched against a log fiery rim casting sweet colours on a blue crystal water almost transparent in the wake of boats We watched and enjoyed the silouhete into the Sun with the darkness of failing shadows. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Dave...you keep topping yourself...and my expectations. Great write! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this format, and the theme is spectacular |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved the entire feel of this Dave....beautfiul |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"We watched and enjoyed the silouhete into the Sun with the darkness of failing shadows." I loved that last line...this is wonderful Dave!  Happy 2005! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks all. Maybe I am mellowing but I dont think so. Thanks Dave |
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